I'm not sure the exact context in which he is writing this for, like if CYL
is the program or project he refers to, but if this is a standalone
document he should probably include some sort of abstract/preamble to set
the stage for his founding principles. Aside from that I would just
recommend he read it through out loud to catch a few grammatical typo's and
misplaced words. These principles in substance are certainly sufficient and
meaningful if directed towards application in underserved areas on the
community level (i.e., the grassroots that he mentions), but can also be
effective for driving local gov't policy changes to effect larger existing
social structures as well. I like his framework, it seems to embody a lot
of what we advocate for in TOK.

-Nik

On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 7:42 AM Henriques, Gregg - henriqgx <
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> Hi TOK List,
>
>   My friend and colleague Gerry Young developed the attached document
> regarding universal principles of welfare, dignity and respect, and asked
> that it be shared for comment and feedback. I will forward any messages to
> him that you might want me to.
>
>
> Best,
>
> Gregg
>
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